GIP

[yakalskovich]

I was complaining about the last quarter of 'Narcissus in Chains', to burning_bryght, when I was suddenly struck by this momentous insight...

**grins evilly**

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[yakalskovich]

And it's not just that, it's needlessly long and detailed. "Everything was done in shimmering white, gold and silver, from the wall hangings and the sofas to the large open fireplace", would have been perfectly adequate.

Instead, she wastes two pages on that.-

[athousanderrors.livejournal.com]

And don't forget how Asher matches. And sparkles!

(in my head, it's JC's sneaky 'fuck you' to Anita; "You ran away; I redid my home to match my sparkly shiny boyfriend")